Security busts students vaping in bathrooms
October 9, 2019
The number of students caught vaping in school has increased from last year.
Various security responded to Pony Express questioning regarding the number of times they have caught students vaping in the bathrooms.
So, how many times is it? It depends on which security person you talk to.
“Once a week,” Ebony, from security, said.
But, some have busted more.
“(The most is) eight or nine times a week,” Chris, from security, said.
And, it seem the number of students vaping has increased from last year.
“This year, I’ve caught about five students (vaping). Last year, I caught two. This week, I’ve caught one,” Luis, from security said.
So, what happens when students are caught?
“It depends based on (the student’s) background and (previous offenses). But, we contact the parent, send (the student) home with a parent, and give an out-of-school suspension,” dean Ms. Gomez said.
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Andres Torres • Oct 10, 2019 at 10:44 pm
I just think the article is great but needs more details on the subject. Can need more transitions but it is a great article for people that don’t know about vape pens being more popular to the point where there has to be more security.
Omar German • Oct 10, 2019 at 7:10 pm
Great topic to talk about, but need more information within the lead.
Guillermo Arellano • Oct 10, 2019 at 2:39 pm
everything was well written but need more help on the lead
Aereanna Gallegos • Oct 10, 2019 at 1:31 pm
The story was off to a good start but stop abruptly
Claudia Gonzalez • Oct 10, 2019 at 11:25 am
Overall you have a good lead, you just need to add more transitions.
Raquel Montoya • Oct 10, 2019 at 9:33 am
I found the article very appealing but the article did need more details and background information.
Beyoncé knowles • Oct 10, 2019 at 9:28 am
A couple grammatical errors. You guys have an intriguing article but I feel you guys can do better and give more information
Kiara Grear • Oct 10, 2019 at 9:25 am
The topic of this article in great, there just needs to be some better transitions to help explain the quotes given by the security.
Alexzandra Rodriguez • Oct 9, 2019 at 9:05 pm
This article has very good quotes, but you should fix the way you transition and maybe put a few indirect quotes.
Alyssa Correa • Oct 9, 2019 at 7:14 pm
I think that the article was too short. There should be more than just quotes from security. The title of the article did catch my attention, but I was disappoint on the lack of information in the article.
Izaih Frutos • Oct 9, 2019 at 1:44 pm
I like how you provided many other experiences security have had catching students through out the year.
There are some minor grammar adjustments that can be made.
Jocelyn Chavez • Oct 9, 2019 at 1:44 pm
This article was short and didn’t have enough of info.
diana rodriguez • Oct 9, 2019 at 1:43 pm
i like your headline but try putting in more transitions