Oh Tannenbaum lights Chicago
December 14, 2016
On November 18, 2016 Chicago’s 103rd Christmas tree lighting ceremony occurred at 6:30 p.m and It took place in Millennium Park. There was different kinds of Christmas trees, one of which was a 69 ft tall evergreen tree full of lights for people to see. People were able to see the reflection of the tree on the bean at millennium park. Many people where able to go ice skating while others were just walking around. People were able to hear performances from plays performed by the theater of Chicago. People where given the chance to take photographs with Santa Clause. People where able to walk around Michigan Ave. to eat food and see more Christmas decorations.
Juan. Chavez • Dec 15, 2016 at 9:44 am
Good topic, but more commas needed, for example, in the beginning after the date a comma could have been used. Too many short sentences, and also it sounds more like a list rather than a article. Could have been better.